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Chapter 2 — the market

The Reader asks questions and shares what it notices. It never rewrites your prose — the words stay yours.

  1. Observation

    The crowd is vivid, but I lost track of what Mara wants from the market as the stalls pile up.

    • Chapter 2
    • The market
    • Review note

    Jul 27, 9:39 PM

  2. Question

    Where did the tension slacken for you across this scene?

    Jul 27, 9:40 PM

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